Wednesday 5 March 2014

Jack and the ugly giant and the big black cupboard

Jack and the bean stalk

One day Jack found a bean stalk he was a curious boy and wanted to climb it but his mum and dad said "what happens if you fall off?" So one night he went and climbed the bean stalk. What he found there was amazing. There was a city built on a cloud  that had lots of giants in it. They could smell him and wanted to eat him. One big ugly giant was coming so he jumped into the  big black cupboard of one. When the big ugly giant was gone he went down the bean stalk and all the way home.

By Hamish
Room b
Turaki primary school
Taumurunui nz

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hamish,
    Using adjectives to describe characters makes your writing more appealing and interesting.
    Miss Turner
    Room B Teacher
    Turaki Primary School
    Taumarunui, NZ

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