Jack and the bean stalk
One day Jack found a bean stalk he was a curious boy and wanted to climb it but his mum and dad said "what happens if you fall off?" So one night he went and climbed the bean stalk. What he found there was amazing. There was a city built on a cloud that had lots of giants in it. They could smell him and wanted to eat him. One big ugly giant was coming so he jumped into the big black cupboard of one. When the big ugly giant was gone he went down the bean stalk and all the way home.
By Hamish
Room b
Turaki primary school
Taumurunui nz
Hi Hamish,
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Miss Turner
Room B Teacher
Turaki Primary School
Taumarunui, NZ