I was sitting on the couch all alone with no one sitting by my side. I was watching breaking news when suddenly "There is a meteor heading towards earth, everyone must evacuate their homes." I got frightened. I sprinted outside as the tv told me to. I looked up towards the sun, all of a sudden everything went pitch black. Then it came out bright again, something came close, it looked like a big ball of rock caught on fire. It was the meteor. It came down as fast as a rocket going up. It sank through the hard ground, pushing through the earth.
What a tragedy! I love your descriptive language and the way you used short and long sentences to create the action.
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Deleteawesome language
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