Wednesday 26 February 2014

Pushing through the earth

Pushing through the earth
Dannielle and I  were going to the town pools. We saw something pushing through the earth it was a.................    white flower. So Dannielle and I hopped in the pool.but the flower grew and grew until it was taller than me. Then it came alive it started chasing Dannielle  and I . It was a Alain flower. What should we do I said to Dannielle she said on the count to 3 run.
1........2..........3......RUN!!! We ran as fast as we could but Dannielle feel over. I quickly helped her up we ran until finally we lost it.   Yay it's gone.

By Rosie 
Room B Turaki primary School 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rosie
    What an original and creative idea for this week's 100 word challenge. I love how you started with a flower pushing through the earth. I thought it was going to be a lovely story all about spring flowers and just as I settled down to read all about spring (as I thought) your flower had grown and grown and turned into a chasing flower - I couldn't believe you managed to put such a twist on it and instead of being a nice happy story it turned out to be quite a scary story although I'm very glad that it had a happy ending and the you both got away from the giant flower. Great writing Well done.
    Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100wc)
    Ireland

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