Thursday, 6 March 2014

My fairy tale

             

Once upon a time there were three little pigs that lived in a cottage together.
One day, they decided that they will build their own little houses alone.
The first pig built his house out of straw, the second built his out of sticks and third built his out of strong brick.
Then along came a wolf and blew the straw house down and ate the first pig then he blew the second house down and ate the next pig. Finally he got a stone and smashed the window climbed in then ate the other pig.
"Yum."Wolf said.
By Waiora.
Room B.
Turaki primary school.
Taumarunui NZ.

4 comments:

  1. Great Writing - I Love how the wolf ate ALL the pigs

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  2. Great idea to re-write the 'Three Little Pigs' fairytale! I hope the wolf enjoyed his meal :)
    Charli
    8B
    Selwyn House School

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  3. I didn't expect the last pig to be eaten by the wolf! In this story, the wolf is clearly very clever!
    What was the writing for? (eg. Was it for fracture fairy tales?)
    That was a good piece of writing :)

    Victoria 8B Selwyn House School

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  4. This is a very cool twist on the three little pigs. This is a very good piece of writing

    Holly McC 8B Sewlyn House School

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