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Hi Kirsty,
I was thought the descriptive language you used in your story created a good visual image. What happens to the character Ike? Did he get better?
Thanks,
Mary
Student
Apple-tree School
- That was an detailed recount of the school cricket tournament. Could you add some photos next time?
- Thanks for sharing that math strategy. Could you solve the same problem with another strategy?
- The alternative ending you created for Sleeping Beauty provided a twist. What happened to the prince after he was thrown in jail? Did he ever get out and live happily ever day?
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