Wednesday, 19 March 2014

The bird hazard

                                       The bird hazard

Once lived a lonely house in the middle of nowhere. There was something wrong with the house. Every single once in a while the'll always be a bird fly through the the window or out. I keep saying to myself "look up can you see the beautiful sky" no I replied all you could see is a abandoned bird flying into a massive group of birds. I just live about five minutes from here I explore this house nearly every day. Every time I get home I'm always covered with bird poo or bird poo with feathers stuck to it.

 

2 comments:

  1. Hi
    Who is the story about? you used very good description, like 'abandoned' and 'massive'. I like how you added hummer at the end with the bird poo line :)

    Kaylee
    Ross Intermediate
    Palmerston North
    New Zealand

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  2. Wow great story I wouldn't have wanted to live in a house with those crazy birds. When will you write more fantastic stories?

    Connor
    Ross Intermediate
    Palmerston North
    New Zealand

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