Wednesday, 26 February 2014

A devil story

A spooky story
Wow! This looks like a cemetery place to me? "I hope there's no hopeless ghost or zombies around because this looks like a fantastic place to me" replied Megan . But  in  between 2.00pm and 2.30pm I was just wandering around like a parrot when Megan ran off but I just kept on walking. When I got a bit more closer I stepped in some mud . So I went on and I heard this screaming. It sounded like Megan. so I hurried  to where she was screaming from. when I got there Megan had been eaten by a zombie.
By Shaquita
Room b Turaki Primary School
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3 comments:

  1. American English2 March 2014 at 09:21

    This was definitely a spooky 100 word challenge, Shaquita! I love that you use the simile "wandering around like a parrot" because it really helps me to visualise the story. What a great twist at the end too - I can't believe Megan had been eaten by a zombie! How scary!

    Laurie (Team 100WC)

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  2. Anonymous2 March 2014 at 13:53

    so awesome

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  3. Anonymous2 March 2014 at 13:55

    Interesting

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