Pushing through the earth
Dannielle and I were going to the town pools. We saw something pushing through the earth it was a................. white flower. So Dannielle and I hopped in the pool.but the flower grew and grew until it was taller than me. Then it came alive it started chasing Dannielle and I . It was a Alain flower. What should we do I said to Dannielle she said on the count to 3 run.
1........2..........3......RUN!!! We ran as fast as we could but Dannielle feel over. I quickly helped her up we ran until finally we lost it. Yay it's gone.
By Rosie
Room B Turaki primary School
cool
ReplyDeleteHi Rosie
ReplyDeleteWhat an original and creative idea for this week's 100 word challenge. I love how you started with a flower pushing through the earth. I thought it was going to be a lovely story all about spring flowers and just as I settled down to read all about spring (as I thought) your flower had grown and grown and turned into a chasing flower - I couldn't believe you managed to put such a twist on it and instead of being a nice happy story it turned out to be quite a scary story although I'm very glad that it had a happy ending and the you both got away from the giant flower. Great writing Well done.
Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Ireland