The mysterious story!
There was once a boy called Jason Kurt who lived in a small area called busy town.It was always busy nobody had time to spare.
But one school night afterJason had dinner he went to go to his room.
Out of the corner of his eye Jason saw a bright light that was shining out of his window.
So he climbed out of the window and followed the light all the way to a portal where there was a house shining brightly.
What Jason Kurt did next nobody knows only that he's gone where no ones been before.
Great story the end was very mysterious wonder what happened to Jason?
ReplyDeleteConnor Turner
Room 14
Ross intermediate
It is good to see verbs in your work. Next time, remember to tell your audience who the author is! I too wonder where Jason Kurt is. Good on you for remember that names of people have capital letters. Can you see in your work which other words require capitals?
ReplyDeleteMiss Turner
Room B Teacher
Turaki Primary School