100 WORD CHALLENGE
It was a dark dark night. I was walking home from my friends house I had stayed there the night. It was Friday the 13 it's the scariest night of the year. know one was brave enough to drive me home or even walk me home so I had to walk home. It took me 40minutes to walk home I said to my
self what if something actually does jump out at me what would I do should I run or get killed I don't know I just won't think about that suddenly I heard rustling in the bush it jumps out !!!
THE END
Well done for using an adjective in your opening sentence. This sentence really set the scene and told me when your story is set. Suddenly is a spectacular word to use and builds a feeling of doom. It would be awesome if you remember to tell your audience who the author is for next time. You have used full stops at the end of sentences. Can you re-read and see where else full stops need to go?
ReplyDeleteMiss Turner
Room B Teacher
Turaki Primary School