The woods
My house is next to the deep dark woods. Some people say that slender man lives in a spooky tree house but of course that's not true.Tonight I'm going trick or treating I say to Fergus. Aren't you afraid of slender man? Fergus said. No of course not! Now come on! After school I meet with Fergus. Suddenly We saw a gleaming light coming from the forest that's when Fergus started to freak out. Soon me and Fergus saw a tree house it was decorated with light we climbed up and opened the door slender man was there oh no! .....
Awesome that you have used adjectives, such as deep and dark. You have created a spooky story in deed. Next time, it is important that you tell your audience who the author is. Good choice of word, 'gleaming' is very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteMiss Turner
Room B Teacher
Turaki Primary School